Recount

Term 2 Recount 2014                                             Name: Royston

Title: Riding Motorbikes with Uncle John

Paragraph Plan: 1 the stinky rat down the road 2 the scavenger hunt 3 shutting the cows in

Whizz! Slam! Nana whizzed around the roundabout like a rocket. “Bye mum,” I yelled as nana took of like a burst of flames. Bam!!! We slipped over a dead rat. Ow my head. “Harden up,” yelled nana as she slammed her foot on the accelerator. Home at last, I thought as I hopped out of the car with jelly like legs. Slam! Nana slammed the door as I walked in through the door and waddled up to the farm. I stuck my head in the draw, looking for the key. “Where is it?” I asked pulling my head out of the draw.  Jingle, jingle. Uncle john made a noise behind me. Whoosh! Uncle threw me the keys and went to start his motorbike. We both zoomed down the track like a flick of a tail. Where was he going? I thought as we whizzed around the corner.  “Aaaaaa!!” I yelled.  I went so fast down the hill I nearly fell off the side of the bridge. Uncle John quickly shut the gate. He told me to go further up so I shot up the track.